Final cut "Time Whisperers"

This is our finished film and we have picked up on the following points;

. 0.34 requires a smoother, longer crossover from speech to clock sound

. 0.42 - dodgy sound effect!

. Export has a long black slug on the end - makes it look like the film is over 3 mins long!

. Animated 'Time Whisperers' title doesn't look good. What about if the clock shot (with ticking sound effect) faded into a static title, then fade to finish

. Requires a soundtrack to enhance visuals